Hi so basically for my year 10 project we have to do a market day. Were selling crepes (like pancakes) and I had to make an advert which we get to stick around the school. It doesn't have to be like a cleaver one with like a message or anything just informational. Anyway heres the link. Be as harsh as you want but please give advice on what I should change.
Link:
http://s727.photobucket.com/albums/ww275/AriKatsushi/?action=view%26amp;current=Screenshot2010-04-14at94545PM.pngPlease tell me how good this advertisement looks!?If this is a high school project, it's ok.
I would change this:
1. Grey background - not really associated with food.
2. Font - use Arial or Helvetica, you can't go wrong with those. Ask any designer.
3. The headline:
The Sugar
Crepe Shop
Those two lines are WAY too separated from each other, try to bring them closer (you can google about %26quot;typographic leading%26quot; or line spacing to learn more). They also break the continuity for your reader, try this:
the (small font)
Sugar Crepe (larger font)
shop (smaller font)
4. If you decide to keep the gray background, change the salmon-pale pink color of %26quot;Market Day%26quot; for something with a lot more contrast.
Overall you are doing a good work, and I hope my suggestions are not too harsh.
Good luck!
